I am not sure about the meaning of this:
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Transformers: Generation 1 (also known as Generation One or G1) was a children's toy line that ran from 1984 to 1991 and was produced by Hasbro.
Would the following rewrite be better?
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Transformers: Generation 1 (also known as Generation One or G1) was a children's toy line the production of which ran from 1984 to 1991 and was produced by Hasbro.
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