In my thesis I want to write the following:
Second, by using the [...] and [...] it was tried to find an appropriate model.
I am not sure about the "it was tried". Can I use it? What would be better?
Answer
I don't think "it was tried" followed by an infinitive is acceptable English. If you have to use the passive voice for stylistic reasons, you could instead say "an attempt was made":
Second, by using the [...] and [...], an attempt was made to find an appropriate model.
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