Monday, April 18, 2016

word usage - How can I say "it was tried"?


In my thesis I want to write the following:



Second, by using the [...] and [...] it was tried to find an appropriate model.



I am not sure about the "it was tried". Can I use it? What would be better?



Answer



I don't think "it was tried" followed by an infinitive is acceptable English. If you have to use the passive voice for stylistic reasons, you could instead say "an attempt was made":




Second, by using the [...] and [...], an attempt was made to find an appropriate model.



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